Commenting Review Week

Looking back on the comments from the first part of the semester, my biggest mistake is grammar. Even when read it out loud to myself, I still miss some obvious spelling mistakes or misused tenses. That will be what I try to fix this later half of the semester. I might have to make one of my roommates read it or something, because I apparently can’t pick up on them. Good news is I have a lot of room for improving! Pulled this image of grammar from Ohio University.

Writing Review Week

Looking back on my storybooks, I found that the stories I enjoyed the most where the ones I rewrote in 1^st person. I am thinking for the rest of this semester I am going to do mostly 1^st person. I think the stories are better, and I remember enjoying writing 1^st person stories more. For example, the story I wrote that had a 1^st person perspective of one of Jesus’s disciples was my favorite one to write. I feel like I can be more creative and imaginative if I just focus on one character really. I chose this image of Snoopy writing only because I love Peanuts and Snoopy is my favorite character.

Reading Review Week

Looking back on the reading diaries, the section I enjoyed the most was the gospel of Mark. I based my story for that week off the book, but I have based most of my stories from the section I mentioned in the reading diaries. The gospel of Mark just stood out the most, and I remember the stories the most from that unit. It was also my favorite story I wrote as well! There wasn't a bad story that I read in Mark, whereas most units have one that I either didn't care for or liked. I am a sucker for awesome hero stories, and Mark is about Jesus whom I believe is the best example of a true hero. It makes sense why that unit stuck out to me the most and I enjoyed it the most. I chose this image of Captain America because he is my favorite superhero, and I also just love this picture!